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Rain's Lullaby

Blushing petals
silently shiver
as sensuous dew
drops slide down
the surface.

Prismatic reflections
of artist's palette
radiate off of
water's facade;
lullaby of wetness
meeting velvet.

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  • carole21
    October 25, 2007
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    great beauty

    nice choice of words . . creates a beautiful picture . . like the "sensuous dew" . .


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    oh beautiful phrases.... drops slide down was a little awkward for me...but this is a precious petal of poetry.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    This is a very nice take on that prompt sweety.Goodluck to you in hte contest.Best wishes and much love