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The New Song

If the fairies could sing,

the elves would dance,

at my feet - a world -

frogs leaping from ponds

into the hand of 

a princess - a kiss - a wish -

a fairytale,

my laughter. 

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  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    a bright and happy magical penning where laughter sweeps across the lanes of poetic bliss. let the leaping begin in earnest.


  • Rowan gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    so lyrically whimsical; I needed to read this lighter sounding piece. Thank you.