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Helpless

..and the worst part of this is,
that you know I'm sorry,
and you know that i care,
and i dont mean what i say,
and i don't mean to make you angry,
or to hurt you,
or to kill you inside,
but to be so alone,
is so scary and dead,
that sometimes our worlds collide,
and we crash and burn,
and no one survives,
where were their rescuers,
in their time of dying,
everybody needs help sometimes,
but i guess you don't want to help me anymore...do you?...


we completely stopped thinknig...
...so why is the world still spinning?..

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  • chasing rainbows
    December 20, 2007
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    oops, forgot applause thingys


  • chasing rainbows
    December 20, 2007

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    bitch please.
    you know I love you, even though you're an all-manner-of-illegal-substances addicted whore. =]

    I seriously don't remember commenting this poem before. Apparently I did.
    More applause thingys for you anyway!

  • chasing rainbows
    November 3, 2007
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    wow.

  • whitewinged1
    November 2, 2007

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    Powerful write and emotionally charged! Can two individuals in need of help either emotionally or physically put their needs aside to offer help to one another?there in i think the key may hide.Less time being absorbed in our own hurt feelings and a bit more concern for others would make a whole world of difference. Bravo well done ! And thanks for sharing your heart!