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A Goth Childs Dead Time Story (Hansel and Gretel) pt 3

Oh fast asleep in sugar gum heaps
Our twins are now in danger
As the tale I spin of sweet confections
Now becomes a little stranger.

In a distant black sky, where the lonely crow flies
A noise could be heard fast approaching
A sinister sound  like a pack of hell hounds
A pitch both menacing and for boding.

It circled three times and landed near by
Bellowing fire and smoke.
No ordinary broom this old crone flew
It read Hoover 1200 V-twin stroke

She wore coal black chaps with chains and straps
Big boots with buckles and spurs
A long pointed hat with a black scarf that wrapped
And a jacket that boasted two words.

Hell’s Angels…..

Now who would of thought, a witch in a gang
As evil as they are.
And what about the twins fast asleep inside
Well I guess that’s for you to decide.

No worries there is another part to this story

Author notes

told ya I didn't have a clue where it was going lol

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  • maryannde gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    Don't ya just hate modern technology! What kind of witch would fly on a vacuum?? LOL she's probably going to cook them in a microwave instead of an oven! Ooooh...now that would be messy!

    Lovin your tale Hon!
    Mary Ann


  • vampira1665 silver member
    October 21, 2007

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    LMAO, this is getting exciting. Kris liked the idea of the broom. Can't wait for more.

    Hugs and bites,
    Vampi


  • antichrist
    October 21, 2007

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    intense......

    very interesting write. i had to read it right twice to get the full effect.

    My favorite part was,"As the tale I spin of sweet confections." There was something about this line that had me believe i was going to read a sweet little write. Then the next thing I knew it is about a sexy hells angel!

    great twist I suppose I should have looked at the title more carefully!!!

    great write!

    keep the pen flowing!