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The key

Voluptuous delights

Caught within a vortex of tranquillity

 

The whispers of seething teeth

Romancing past fortunes

Offering you

The key to the tales of life

 

Justifying the blood within your existence

You slowly absorb visions of unwanted souls

Feeling the voluptuous delights

 

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  • Janice M Pickett
    December 9, 2008

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    Great take on the picture. Isn't it amazing as a poet, what our imaginations come up with? After reading this, I could just see the place filled with the unwanted souls. Excellent n


  • penman gold member
    December 31, 2007
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation based upon the image. Very well crafted.


  • Michael A. de Melo
    December 28, 2007

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    Thought Provoking

    This image would have (and maybe still will) been a great prompt for me. You composed a beautiful symphony of imagery and metaphore. I can't believe this didn't win the gold.


  • MartaJay
    December 20, 2007
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    i like the image of it keep it up


  • macandrew
    November 22, 2007

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    Voluptuous delights
    Caught within a vortex of tranquillity

    Love this start especially with the image.
    A wonderful read.
    John


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 19, 2007
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    Very descriptive and very well done!
    Great imagery!
    All the best to you...always!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    A very potent piece with lots of imagery here within few lines. I really enjoyed this, and thanks for sharing here. Peace, and all the best within this contest!


    -Timothy


  • Lily of the Valley
    October 22, 2007

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    This poem has quite a ghostly feel to it as though all the spirits from the past are watching, waiting for something or someone to come along and free them from limbo.


  • Electric Sunrise gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    This is what i tend to love about image based contests, the picture can prompt a thousand different toughts, and no two thoughts are ever the same between people, similar yes the same no.

    I'm delighted with how this piece has turned out, there's an interesting gothic romantic feel about this piece.

    Favourite line: "Justifying the blood within your existence"

    There's an image you can take to the bank. Excellent work here, thanks for the entry and best of luck


  • Amera gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    Yea! This is fantastic! Packed with forboding image the descriptive vocabulary you use speaks volumes. I have watched you grow into a wonderful portess and it's an honor to read your work.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • carole21
    October 21, 2007
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    suits the photo

    your words are well chosen . . good luck in the contest . .


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    oh wow hun this is truly amazing and really captured the picture beautifully with strong powerful words
    well done and best of luck

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