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Flowers

Roses are red, Violets are Blue.
But Neither one, is as pretty as you.

Daffodils are yellow and hostas are green.
You're the prettiest flower, I've ever seen.

Gallardias are orange, phlox is pink.
Cara is the loveliest, bloom I think.

Poppies are red, Many colors for Mum,
The Kiss of your lips is My Opium.

Bachelor buttons are a lovely Blue,
I'm not a bachelor thanks to you.

But of all the flowers in the bouquet of life,
The Most beautiful of all is Cara my wife.

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Flowers
By: DrunkenRam
10/21/2007

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  • individuality gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    a good piece, showing love singing devotion into the heart and mind while the spirit twirls in appreciation


  • secberm
    January 3, 2008

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    Awww... I'm a romantic at heart. Shhh...! Everyone here thinks I'm a thug for a reason. Let's keep it that way! LOL

    DEZ


  • CherryOnTop
    November 12, 2007
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    This is a beautiful tribute to Cara


  • Me a poet-maybe
    November 2, 2007
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    These didn't take below so.....


  • Me a poet-maybe
    November 2, 2007
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    Cara....ya got yersef quita katch !
    Jes keeeeep im wayfrum thet SHINE......


  • jcat gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    This is so sweet and beautiful!! What a lucky wife to have such a romantic husband as you! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • X iMPERFECTiON x
    October 23, 2007
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    nice flow! great write! (btw, you put "you're" as "you,re") good luck in the contest! =]


    • DrunkenRam
      October 23, 2007
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      Thanks for the Comment, I fixed the typo as well thanks for pointing that out. Me and My Clumbsy finger's.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 21, 2007
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    thanks babe


  • CherryOnTop
    October 21, 2007

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    superb

    You tell em ram Let that love for cara flow through those fingers.


  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 21, 2007

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    Just goes to show that you really care about ther, its so lovely to have someone like that. I wish many happy years for you two. Nice to see you think of her as the prettiest flower of them all.

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