He gave her some roses
asked her out on a date
meet me on quality street
just after eight
Arriving on time the
night still young
kissing her creamy
dairy milk cheek
he whispered softly
it was fate we should
meet
Under a moonlit
galaxy sky
the sweetness of
his kiss made
her high
Floating on aero
swept off her feet
their hands caressing
feeling the heat
Found her kit kat so
wet, warm and sweet
running her hands
down over his thighs
Taking old of his
chewy nuts he let
out a sigh
pleasure intense
he grabbed hold
of her hips
His large throbbing
bounty now seeking
her walnut whip
A ripple of pleasure
rushed over her skin
as he slid his flake
deep within
To revels together
in the depths of the
night let out a cry
of turkish delight
feasting on their
sweet love.
Author notes
Written whilst drunk.
Roses, Quality street, After Eight, Dairy Milk, Galaxy
Aero, Kit Kat, Chewy nuts, Walnut Whip, Flake, Ripple,
Revels, Bounty, Turkish Delight, are all chocolate or chocolate covered sweets.
A contest entry
- Wierd And Wacky And Bizzare by lesbian-in-love.
525 points, ended November 13, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha ha. I will never eat a kit kat again without thinking of this script. lol. Perhaps a little bit of food fetish is good for the soul. Have a smor.
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LOL!! A little tipsy when I wrote this,
put it this way I like my chocolate
Thanks for reading and commenting
~sugar~
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This one caught me off guard. I like that. I started of sweet and had a little spice in it. Enjoyed the write!
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Thank you so much MahoganyFlow
I appreciate you reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
~sugar~
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That is bizzare in a way. The words you used went rather well. I enjoyed this one. Thanks for entering into my contest and good luck to you.
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*chuckle*
If you wrote this while you were drunk, then I can imagine what you would write while sober. This is brilliant, as always.
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Hey Jaime
Glad it made you chuckle. It made me LMAO! while I was writing it.
Love your friend
~sugar~
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I Loved that onesugar so witty and kinky haha Ideal for a chocoholic
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Thank you Mj
love ~suagr~
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You are such a naughty girl when you are three sheets to the wind!
Some people want to fight when they get hammered, some fall asleep, some get hornier then a male rabbit in a den of horny females, and others dream of chocolate sweets! He! He! I hope that you didn't have too many chocolate sweets around the house, sugar - or you may just have to go out to buy an entire new wardrope for the winter that will be on it's way soon. You seem to have forgotten one of your all time favs in this sensual piece - HOT CHOCOLATE with whipped cream and a flake!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I hardly ever eat sweets, I'm sweet enough LOL!!!
It's good to be naughty! He!He! Appreciate you reading always a pleasure to have you stop by
Love you ~sugar~
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Lmao!! I knew U could do something creative, This was so much fun to read and the thought of the condition U were in to create it is great. Nicely done
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I was LMAO! while I was writing it
Let's just say I was in such a condition everything seemed funny!
Glad you enjoyed it
Love ~sugar~
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I like this a lot. The rhyme is brilliant and the flow is really good. Very original piece of writing. This has some really good imagery too.
Wayne
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Hey there hun
Appreciate you reading and commenting as always
Love ~sugar~
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great write sis....
I think you have penned this very well, with the usage of your word back there. Lovely.
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Hey, I like it!
Sounds like a drunken dream to me [I often have those]. Maybe you should write under the affluence of inkahol more often [did I say that right?].
Actually, I thought it was very good, an unanticipated sexual encounter that was very pleasurable. The next time you go into the bar, look toward the other end. I'll be the big guy sitting there with a scotch and water in his hand. And...I'll make your dream come true!
Well formed and well flowed, if you hadn't told me you were drunk, I would have never known it.
All my love, Michelle,
Brazos
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B next time i'm there I will buy you a drink.
It's always a pleasure to have you stop by
Thank you for your wonderful comment
Love you ~sugar~
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