I wait in the park,
For whom im not aware.
All I know is part of me is
[M]
[I]
[S]
[S]
[I]
[N]
[G]
I feel so empty;
I can't figure out what's gone.
Until a gorgeous young man walks
[P]
[A]
[S]
[T]
I want to give him my...
Then it came to me!
For i am missing my
[H]
[E]
[A]
[R]
[T]
So as he walks past I form my hands
As a beautiful heart,
I try to lend it to
[H]
[I]
[M]
He Looks at me strange,
And picks up his speed.
I guess it wasn't good
[E]
[N]
[O]
[U]
[G]
[H]
So I slump in the park,
All lonsome and such.
Hands shaped as a heart, is good enough for
[M]
[E]
A contest entry
- HELP ME!!!!! by ShadowsDream.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aaww gf! So young yet so mature & apparently strong too (taking from the conclusion of this piece)... I much liked it... careful not to give away your heart all too soon though!!
Oh and yeah as you may have noticed I found you... have my ways hehe... thanx 4 reserving a spot on my contest + hope 2 see u fill it in soon~ tc <3 Alex~
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Thank so much, and i just wrote my poem to your contest. Thanks and i hope you like it.
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You seem busy today, writing so many wonderful poems. I enjoyed that falling slant efect. Sad poem that it is but well written with emotions.
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