Think of a world
With no wars,
But happiness and peace,
And the guns shoot
Happiness,
That is my dream.
Think of a world
With no thefts,
But people who gave
stuff away,
And drug addicts that
injected love,
That is my dream.
Think of a world with
no poverty,
But with love and joy,
And the world was
Polluted with bliss,
That is my dream.
Think of a world with
no terrorists,
But there were bombs
of tranquillity
And cars that could run
on love,
That is my dream
Think of a world
With no racism,
But where all people
Are equal,
And the bullies beat you
with love,
That is my dream.
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That is deep
I have really enjoyed your poetry even though I have not commented on all of them. Great combination of thought, feeling, and emotion. I to was raped as a child. I think in a way it comes out in my poetry, but not so forsefully. You say your poetry is dark poetry. Atleast I don't really think so. Atleast not my understanding of dark poetry. Life sometimes stinks and it is good that you can verbalize it so. Peace, Erick -
I guess we could start with bubble guns.
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Thank you both for you comments I wish to the world could be like that but I am not sure it ever will b.
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wow!:D
great written! I love how you start each piece with "Think of a world" and ends with "That is my dream". And that you use the world "love" in so great ways
I'd love to live in your world
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I think its just fine. I wish the same thing because Im sick and tired of how things are in this world. Its just sicken what we all are doing. But this was great. I see no reason to change anything, but I know others might think so... But w/e. I liked it.
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