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One chance

Another step
Another sigh
One more mountain
One more try

I know this road
I’ve been here before
I’ve seen this hole
I’ve felt the cold

In my mind
I can feel the waterfall
My body shakes for water
My soul wants more

Somehow I’m back where I began
When my body just wants the pain to come to an end
It finds it hard to understand
Why I’m doing this to myself once again

Why can’t I start to listen to my head?
Instead of listening to everything else
I just want to be happy
I just want to be secure

Please give me a chance
To give my soul what it lives for

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  • Siby Anan
    October 21, 2007
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    Amazing.

    I'll bet millions of people feel like this.

    Quite well written

  • Trapped-inside-life
    October 21, 2007
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    I Love it.

    It's well written poem well done. L x