A Waterfall, A Waterfall.
Through the crystal waters,
your face.
Gone but not forgotten,
held now in Gods embrace.
A waterfall, A waterfall.
Full of nothing,
but their tears.
I do not mourn for you,
just that you're no longer here.
A waterfall, A waterfall.
Emotions running
flowing everywhere.
I look up to the Heavens,
because I know that you are there.
A waterfall, A waterfall.
Ribbons are afloat,
Celebration has begun.
We look from the rain clouds,
to the bright mid-day sun.
A waterfall, A waterfall.
Your laughter holds its sound.
A waterfall, A waterfall.
Your smile will always be around.
Author notes
Inverted-Hearts
Option #3
For a passed friend.
She's an amazing person.
Kelsey Lockenhour.
A contest entry
- CONTEST FOR GIRLS TALK BOYS TALK GROUP by Jeremy0826.
1100 points, ended October 30, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is such a sweet dedication to your friend.
I am very sorry for your loss. There was one
error I found in your fourth stanza and second line.
The word Celibration should be spelled Celebration.
Also, please add your username to your "Author Notes"
as well as the option number that you have chosen to write about. Please message me when you have done so. Thanks a lot for your entry and good luck to you with it in my contest!
Jeremy0826
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Ahh, yes I wrote this and had to leave, I had forgotten to fix spelling and options. I was in a hurry, so sorry. It has been fixed. Thank you for reading.
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No problem! Thanks a lot for making the corrections. Take care and good luck!
Jeremy0826
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