Such beauty finds your face in rain,
this petal’s sanctuary
of scented symmetry,
embracing pain, as heaven's starship,
bubbles blessed
to wash in wisdom,
what was yesterday's elusive sunshine.
They roll like eyes of internal skies
in freshened consideration,
where love just cannot turn and run,
to find in shedding velvet touch,
a bitter world
of lost and lonely.
In staring soul beyond the stillness,
holding close
to drops of weather,
this glittered necklace,
of breathless diamonds,
slowly lifts sweet sighs of morning,
swimming pools in pastel wishes,
for what is wet in wild's dominion.
These are sacred tears of contrition,
passion's rose blushing truth
in tasting haven
inside your hollow,
caressing curve of deeper canyons,
revealing more than you imagined.
A contest entry
- Nature PIF by CarolDesjarlais.
625 points, ended October 23, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hurry by FindingFaith.
300 points, ended October 25, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrats to you, i am happy you got gold for this one,,,loved it, I have read it a few times now
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Congratulations sweetheart! I knew this was a winner in the contest.
Blessings & Love ♥
Renee
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Oh this poem simply swayed into my thoughts of forgiveness, of love...and the ending was astounding... an ephiphany moment.
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"this glittered necklace,
of breathless diamonds"
a wondrous visual is set in these particular lines my friend. The entrie poem is a literary delight! This writ is truly breathtaking. I always walk away from your words with a a pleasant and hefty sigh. Gorgeous, a bit melancholy but ever beautiful! I wish you the best in this challenge.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Beautifully written in lovely words of whispered softness. This is perfect for Carol's contest....
Amazing!
Lynda
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