she snuggles closer
as I plan my move
the alarm rings
In a list
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 21, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How Witty Can You Be? by femurlee.
1000 points, ended May 1, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
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This might need a new catagory -- eroticu. Love the endearing picture. Peace.
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Damn it!
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I love this!
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oh yes indeed. this is what i am talking about snuggling close to the one you love for the weekend. great job.
best wishes to you -
she snuggles closer
as I plan my move
the alarm rings
Ah, dream or reality, nice weekend haiku.
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Susie
And that decision is left up to the reader to decide. It might changed daily depending on mood.
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Seems like a good dream interupted, lol. Nice haiku, dont know why I never write any. But I've had many dreams interupted by either my alarm clock or my cat begging for food, lol. I like this.
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ArcaneBeast
Ah!!!!! But was it a dream???? You decide.
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