O ! Rose...
Tortured rain drops poured
tears,
Hurt ?
Made suffer?
Feel an immense love
So much...until reprimand hurts
Then ... why cry?
Want to sleep...to wake up...glued,
To feel perfume of
body entwined,
To see the sun
entering window,
Illuminating beautiful complexion,
A present with burning rays.
Do not cry pink petals, do not cry...
For me..you are complete.
Love you,
More than everything in this world
Never going to see you suffer
in life, to be tied,
Live like eternal
Joined up to death
On day of separation
take in heart,
Transcending space in sphere,
The infinite love.
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Prompt: rose_with_rain_drops by vic vicini
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A contest entry
- Nature PIF by CarolDesjarlais.
625 points, ended October 23, 2007, 9 entries
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I chose such a cliche picture...and found nothing cliche int his write...ty for entering.

