So dainty these petals
sprinkled delicately
from Heaven's heart.
Only an Angel
could love such fragility,
yet pierce the pulse-
taking its breath
without wilting blossom.
♥
Author notes
pic inspired
rose_with_rain_drops by vic vicini
A contest entry
- Nature PIF by CarolDesjarlais.
625 points, ended October 23, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice,
You captivate the readers with your well versed lines that read so divine that flow from your angelic soul.
Thanks for sharing, always a pleasure reading you. 
Much love, bro Timothy
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in a few words, you take breath away.... truly there is something sacred and abiding in this poem.
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Your poetry is as delicate as a petal, this is soft and beautiful, Love this!
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So filled with the beauty of a true glance into the depht of such a common miracle...at to look at it with the fresh eyes of an angel...just amazing angel poet
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Beauty
As always you word play is astounding and I love it. your words flow with the graceful beauty of a musician playing soft melodic music and your your rhythm and flow are so strong that it roften reminds one of a soothing calm lapping waves of the ocean. anyw ays in a nuthsell yiour poem is beautiful and your wording rocks and you should place no matter what. keep up the good work. 
Signed, Paul
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