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I値l Make It Better


I値l Make It Better
Tralika M.


I will make it better as I fix the problems
The broken down era痴 to the hurtful errors.
Love of dosages can be sent off in the arms
Of the wrong postage. I am here to make
Everything all better like taking your hand
Easing the pain. You are a factor of my heart
Rafter as I hand paint your knitting disasters.
I値l make it all better like listening to the water
Taps in your laughter. I am coming down
To up lift you being down and help regain
You through my love sounds. I will make it all
Better I promise you I been asking for this as
My big wish . Why was it granted this way
As I see it took a toll on you. I told you to let
That world go and let me through. I
Will make it all better my heart only
Pounds off of the mission of loving you.

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I値l Make It Better
comforting a love that
completes you

I値l Make It Better

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 10, 2008
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    A sweet gesture...

    ...make it all better, even reread typing what you wrote feels...nice! good work lady!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    This is a great write and I really enjoyed
    reading it. Thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Whenitefallz
    October 23, 2007

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    Such a sweet warrior, this symbolizes..
    "'Til my end." should always be conveyed as this..

    Just lovely!!

    Highness. . .


  • Mykeee
    October 22, 2007

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    Making it better is the perception of
    both the giver and the receiver.
    Making a feeling real for someone
    is something most people want to give.
    Nice way you wrote this ~ Mikeeee


  • tomisb
    October 22, 2007

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    be careful, the line between caring and taking care of is a fine one. Love is a partnering. You can find yourself living two lives and hearing how you are not doing one of them too well if not careful.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 22, 2007

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    awe! well you know i cant say much about this right now but i am going to say dont have to much faith in my directions but i love ya and again thanks

    juju


  • Ephiphany
    October 22, 2007
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    Very sweet...you have a beautiful heart.

    e


  • rose petal desires
    October 21, 2007

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    this was sweet i the prophet of love hate to see some one drown in pain even if i wanted for myself sometimes its best to let things take its natural course by doing that the understanding of things will be so much better


  • rainbow bi trinity
    October 21, 2007
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    nice you did a great job with a fairy tale thought
    good luck to your mystery
    xxx1000xxx

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