Dylan
laying across this big brass bed
candle light
music playing in my head
warm caress on my breasts
sleepy sexy lovers weight
dreaming warm give and take
pull the quilt about
lovers spoon arms about my waist
sleeping sated
breathing as one
A contest entry
- ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 205 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really liked this ~ it's beautifully done ~ One of the things I'm a real stickler for with free writters is for the line breaks to be in the right places ~ I'll usually read it out loud ~ just so I can hear the impact of the words and how they are placed. You really did a nice job ~ it's different ~ yet inviting ~ it really is uniquely created ~ and I enjoyed reading it!
Thanks so much for entering the "set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you! -
Beautiful
Beautiful poem. full of love.
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dylan...
Always liked the Dylan song! This is a great poem and a worthy trophy winner... very sweet!
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this is a beautiful poem. I love Bob Dylan, now that's a man that knows his music. beautiful all the way, your poem. love the background too.
congratulations on the bronze trophy.
kat
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Tender and Beautiful
This is both tender and beautiful. A lovely and heartwarming piece of writing. I was lucky enough to see Dylan at a music festival once. I really enjoyed this poem, thankyou for sharing this with me. Congratulations on your trophy, it's very well deserved. All my best wishes from Rose xxx
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I like this a lot and I enjoyed reading it. great job.
congratulations on the bronze, well deserved. Rheea, I love Bob Dylan.
sister pot
Kat
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