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Baby's day out!









Every weekend,
they cool off for a short movie
gulping heavy lunch
on a huge matinee couch
and spend some idle moments
playing pool.
rolling jokes over a bowling game,
either smacking each other with popcorn tubs,
or shopping at every mall lavishly
for scoops of latest fashion buzz
else lying lazy at local clubs
speedy cars on go-karting tracks
laugh and giggle
sporting up group pranks,
a bike race along the shores stirrs an excitement
between the couples
smooching cotton candies facing sea
while a rich chocolate ice-cream
softens their sore throats
as the day sinks its energy



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lol couldnt get a better title..mite change it later :-P

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  • Kram
    October 30, 2007
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    velvetty

    its like touching a velvetty surface withmind ...please give more poems llike this


  • Swan song gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    What a lovely way to spend time with someone who is special Well done dear I liked it

    • Ankeeta silver member
      November 1, 2007
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      yes ofcourse and my city provides with all these options...i now have discovered it with special people around ...you name it and you get it here

      thanks

      A


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY!!!

    How could one ever ask for a more perfect day!

    • Ankeeta silver member
      November 1, 2007
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      exactly!! life's a sport...never give up playing


      A

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