Sunlight sleeps softly as
passing breezes waft,
mingling amongst autumn’s
first caressing touch,
golden flickering reminders
heralding season’s change,
lamenting their own
soon demise
and serenity prevails
over all melancholy souls,
as twilight
bids them all goodnight.
In a list
A contest entry
- Imagination by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended November 1, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent
very good and imagination. I love the idea of this last stanza:
and serenity prevails
over all melancholy souls,
as twilight
bids them all goodnight
congrats, and best regards, friend.
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Beautiful
This is awesome, the imagery is superb.
golden flickering reminders
heralding season’s change,
lamenting their own
soon demise
Outstanding verse, they all were but this one stood out for me. A lovely take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
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