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Bliss and Satisfaction

Just waiting, just watching
Wanting you every time you move
Loving you when you speak
You caress my check and kiss my lips
So simply at first but then more eager
Slipping your tongue over mine
So sweetly you make the kiss end
Then surprise me more
Moving your hand to my clothes
You help me undress and then lay me down
I try to help you but you refuse
You want me to watch you and look at you in aw
I do as asked and then groan in desire at what I see
First you take your shirt
Exposing a beautiful torso with glorious muscles
I want you more now then before
Then you take off your pants and boxers
Revealing a hardness that I want
I make a move to devour you but you stop me again
Resting your hands lightly on my chest
Placing me back down you kiss me
Those wonderful lips on mine
That lovely tongue running over mine
As you kiss me that way you do
Your hand starts to move downward
I stop moving and wait for you
You take one finger and rub my clit
Then you place another finger outside me
Close enough to drive me up a wall
I want you in me and in my wetness
I need you to feel me on the inside
You stop kissing me and look into my eyes
Your hand moving to go inside of me
You slow as if to ask if you may
I know you want the control but I move you in
Taking my hand over yours
I let you know it's okay
I gasp at the warmth of it all
Not sure if it's you me or both of us
Then you move in and out
Rubbing me all over as you go
I moan in the delight of it all
You start to kiss me again in that passionate way
While one hand is moving in and out of me
The other is caressing my face and hair
This time you break the kiss because you're moving
You place yourself on top of me
Staring at me with hunger and lust
Then you kiss my throat and neck
Moving your lips over every inch of my front
Stopping only briefly to play with my breasts
Your touch is as light as you kiss
Gently at first then a little harder
You place your hands on my inner thighs
Your hands squeezing every now and then
I never knew that touching me there could have an effect
You place your tongue on my wetness
Not going in but licking a little
Then you devour me in whole
Slipping your tongue in and out of me
Then sucking me dry and wetting me again
I moan and gasp and you keep going
Then you're back to my lips
Kissing me in a new way
Hard with hunger, desire, want and, even need
While you're kissing me
I feel your hard on my wet
Again waiting to go in
I move my hands to your back and open my legs
Then placing a little pressure
I let you know that you may finish what you started
You understood what I meant all too well
You slip in a little and retreat
Then you do it again and again
Slowly adding more of you each time
Then you start to move while staying inside of me
I fill with moans and screams
Not yet ready to release them
While you move inside me
You kiss me and caress my face
As you're kissing me I start to quake
The moans and screams build
I don't release them yet
Then you start to shake a little
Then I feel that warmth of you
I know it's right to go
I let loose the screams and moans
You let out a roar of relief
Then you kiss me
Running your tongue over mine
You're still in me moving a little
I caress your back and move my hands all over
I trace the muscles on your torso
You finally retreat for the last time
I lay beside you with my hand gently on your face
We fall asleep in complete bliss and satisfaction

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  • Zerstort
    November 9, 2007
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    I like this...you did have me squirming, so that's a good thing.

    Good luck,

    Aden Recreated


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 22, 2007

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    I love the word 'bliss' and everything that it conjures within the mind. It's such a poetic word and as a result, you had me in the moment with your title alone. I think you have nailed this one right out of the ballpark with all its depth and savory delights. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in the contest. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • janejainejayne gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    WOW

    Well, you must forgive me as I only read the title and should have read the catagories...
    But never the less the thrill of love is evident in every word and the joy of uniting! You are right in the moment and it shows! Jane