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Watching Me.

I see you standing there, watching me , watching you .
I'm just warning you to beware, I'm lazy with nothing to do.
This is my spot , and I enjoy it well.
If you dont mind please watch the tail.

I'm alittle tuckered , can't you see ?
Why do you even want to bother me ?
I just want to rest , and be left alone .
If you want to play , find that dog and his bone.


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  • A delightful poem that was a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.


  • Kram
    May 15, 2008
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    ya good

    ya its good

  • i liked this


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    December 26, 2007

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    I really like this. I love the flow and the rhyme of it. And I love the ending too. More please, you are good.

    Wayne Leon


  • PureRomance
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a very good poem. I love it. Congrats on winning HM in the contest. This poem deserved it. May God bless you in everything you do and write, and I look forward to reading more from you as my time permits. This has a sort of humor to it that I just caught to be really well written and penned. Wonderful job with this my fellow poet. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more from you as my time permits.


  • Fearylynn
    October 21, 2007

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    This is very cute! A nice, light-hearted take. Definitely captures that blase attitude most cats have.

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