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Just Smoke Another One

Step
  Step
[Take another breath]
Wipe away another tear;
they can't see it anyway;
the skys already crying.
&& the sweat drops mix with every step.

[The moon and you make my heart skip a beat]
      [and it's good to know you're still alive]

Her iPod sings well her heart screams.
Her feet bleed; its better then a wrist she says.
The rush last so much longer.
[Det Regner]
  [Det overskyet]
and she continues to miss you.
Shes on an endorphone high.

You can deny it all you want;
smoke another blunt.
But in the end she still loves you;
it shows in the pointless words she writes about you.

She hits next praying this song wont make her think of you;
because she knows its true.
[She doesn't want to live without you.]

Speak your words

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  • freespirit51
    October 21, 2007

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    Such a beautiful piece of poetic artistry my dear friend. I love the words you chose in this piece. You give it life and lots of emotions with the them. Great to read your work again.


  • u took my user name
    October 21, 2007
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    tsk tsk
    and you didn't wanna come back to AP

    well written tesorino

  • the chase
    October 21, 2007
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    I love this <3

    " [and it's good to know your still alive] " your is supposed to be you're.

  • venus21
    October 20, 2007

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    This poem is so good but she is storng and you need you more thin any body and your family.But I like this.