sometiimes i feel sad,happy,curious,and nervous,but it's ok because sometimes i feel furious. When
i feel furious i want to throw stuff, scream,cry,or even crawl into a corner
¬ speak,but sometimes its ok
because those are called feelings.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ~ Enter your best prewrite by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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HI
hi lisa how r u? -
Ah yes, those feelings... every knows all too well what you are talking about cause we all know how it feels to be sad, happy, curious and so on
Thank you for entering the contest!
Leander -
Welcome to AllPoetry
G'day lov
Strong write. It is obvious this comes straight from the heart with you.
I am sorry you feel such pains at such a young age
I hope things only improve for you
I have a slight suggestion; the poem would flow a little easier if you moved the 'When' in the second line down to the thrid so it starts the line off.
Just a suggestion
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Enjoy AllPoetry
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Cool
Thats what I feel
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