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Moral Code






The important thing

is where we draw the line,

Connie told me

in an alley

back of Rexall drugs -

he and I full-blush,

nine years old,

mustering ways

to tell ourselves

it's okay

to steal a thing or two.
(Later on he told me

it was a line from

Perry Mason.)

 

Connie knew a thing or two

about drawing lines

for purposes of

sleeping at night

(he told me

it was just

the family business

on his daddy's side).

 

That was not the last time

I drew the line so low,
sometimes too deep

in need of

single malt

on a blended diet,

but I never looked at a dead man

past the end of a pistol.

Connie did.




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  • Annalise
    November 8, 2007
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    God- I love the Connie poems.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    "That was not the last time
    I drew the line so low,
    sometimes too deep"

    Raw, real & visceral penning, my Friend. I don't know if Connie is a real person or not, or even a composite of several people; if not, you've certainly fleshed him out & given him a real voice in your work. Always impressive, Scribe. Good luck in Meli's challenge, Sweetie. Wanda


  • Rheea gold member
    October 21, 2007
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    who scott who did he look at