I feel unloved, uncared for, hated, I dont wanna live here and she doesn't want me near.
I try to love her even when its hard, yet she sits in the yard with hate in her eyes, she doesn't listen yet she hears my cries, she yells at me while tears form in my eyes for I just want to be loved not critisized.
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This is very full of emotion and well written too.
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Remember how excited I was when I posted my first poems on this site nearly three years ago. After reading this I can understand how you feel - sentiments well expressed. Think you need to tell her this, or show it to her. Yelling at each other does not solve anything. She is concerned about your safety, and am sure she loves you. You want to have fun, but you first need to earn her trust. Think you hav a big part to play in how this works out. Don't raise your voice, but stop and talk to her like you would a friend. Again, welcome to AP. Sending you a link soon to a poem I wrote about teens and th troubles they have with their parents, grandparents.
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Welcome to AllPoetry
G'day lov
This is a powerful write. Sad. Honest. Raw. Beautifully tragic.
I am sorry you have to endure that kind of pain
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Enjoy AllPoetry
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Wow. First of all, welcome to AllPoetry. This was a very interesting peice you have here. Not in poetry form, though it is obvious with the rhymes that it started out with the intention to be one. I am sorry for the reason that you wrote it. It is always hard when parents are not the loving, caring humans that they should be. We are a greedy race, and our fallicies outweigh any grace we could possibly accomplish in our lives. I hope, for your sake, that she changes and realizes that she has missed out on a lot of what is the greatest gift she was ever given.
Write on.
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Tianna
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holy cr** ur names tiana??
me too!
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