In the warmth
of passion we infuse,
anything beyond us is blue.
In unison,
our aurora's explode
into arid essence.
As oil to water,
we stay bouyant
in a lover's embrace.
In a list
A contest entry
- Tempt My Heart - PW by Melissa Burns.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank u for entering this into my humble little contest
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Your words are short but clear and concise. One never need too many words to state a point. Less is sometimes more and this proves it. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Oh So Very Beautiful!!!
I can't quite describe the magical wonder of this poem - it grabbed my cold heart in a clutch, and brought a warm smile to my weary face! Exciting imagery & outta sight visuals!! I wish you all the very best!!! Peace, Cyn
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