the cloud bosom light
into floating children hands
wonderment invite
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; Any poets that have not won Gold, Silver, or Bronze in the previous 4 contests listed below and are not displayed on group page. by InBetweenThoughts.
1050 points, ended November 12, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a cute little haiku with uniqie insite.
Well done
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thank u
thank for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. The dog is cute. Saddie23
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i love haiku style poetry, the 3 lines very easy to do, but the 17 syllables that's the herders part, at least for me, the hold idea is to create an image i think you pull that off, great work.
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thank u
Tnank u for a wonderful critique and the applaudes was a plus. I'm glad this ku speaks volume to merit the style of writing. Saddie23
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such a cute haiku from you. i wish you well in this contewt that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku and hoped it spoke to u an way that touch u to some level of understanding. Saddie23
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Great write. I love Haiku poems. They may be short but most of them hold some wonderful meaning about nature or love. This Haiku is light hearted and makes me think of my adorable nephews.
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Wow!
I'm trully amazed how quick the reponse came to my ku. I so thankful I recieved such good compliments given to ku. Saddie23
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very nice haiku
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thank u
I'm so glad that u like ku. Thank u for the great comment and applaudes. Saddie23
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