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[ I want to tell you ]

I want to tell you
"I love you"
really, I do
but I don't want to lie

It's not your fault
my heart was ripped out of my chest
and seasoned with salt
never can I trust again

I was hurt so bad
maybe it was just puppy love
but I lost everything i ever had
not I am a mutilated dove

Robbed of my purity,
all that I had left
why can't you see
the love I show and confess?

Comment please. Just tell me what you think. Thanks.

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    January 7, 2008
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    I really like this poem. Awesome job.

  • venus40
    October 21, 2007

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    Its hard for a guy to see what going on so we girls move on to bigger and batter thing and just hope we wont get hart again.But this is a very nice poem,