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Multiplication

Hi, my name is DeeDee and I remember all
My name is Roger Wattabie and I don't listen at all
I am Lou and I am four and don't enjoy the noise
Gigi is who I have become with all the grace and poise
We all have only a little thing in common and that is
We live inside dear Frederick and help him keep his wits

Author notes

This is about Multiple Personality Disorder. It's definitely not one of the best poems I've ever done, but oh well.

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  • Onion Boy
    November 2, 2007

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    Cute. You're right, its not one of your best, but it is good. Made me smile, so its gotta be worth something. Silverstein-esque.


  • angleof death
    November 1, 2007
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    this was very amusing.


  • Skawe
    October 21, 2007
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    no, it's not. but it was amusing.


  • scottles
    October 21, 2007

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    ah

    at first i dint get it, but then ur "author note" explained it, either way its really good, i like simplicity....