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Don't Ask

Don't ask me what goes through my mind
Or what I think of you
Don't ask me what I feel
Or who I love
Don't ask me what I see
Or what I know
Don't ask me about my thoughts
Or about secrets

Only I will ever know these things
Unless of course,
I choose to tell you

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Don't ask

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Superb

    Such emotion in so few words, brilliant! You have written a great piece here. Best of luck in the contest!


  • TheAshtrayGirl
    October 28, 2007
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    :)

    Great poem
    Short and sweet
    Yet full of emotion
    Thanks for entering my contest
    Jaz <3


  • emokiari
    October 26, 2007

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    i like it...i think that you should keep your secrets to yourself unless you choose that you should tell someone...