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Unkown

What I feel, see and know nobody will understand
I have a messed up mind in many ways
Many more ways then you will ever realize
I feel everything
And I feel nothing
I am loosing myself
In my own mind and body
My heart is becoming
Something you might find
Under the bed of the unknown child, nothingness
My spirit evaporates from my body,
Not liking what I have become

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Don't ask cuase I don't know what it is about but I like it.

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  • AmoretteDeMorte
    October 20, 2007
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    I know exactly how you feel. I relate to this poem on many different levels.


  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 20, 2007

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    "What I feel, see and know nobody will understand
    I have a messed up mind in many ways
    Many more ways then you will ever realize"

    Oh i can relate to that. If only I can show people the inside of my head... lol. I found this rather creative. So well constructed.