raindrops puddling
on a fallen leaf
gentle autumn rain
delicate leaves
no longer taking moisture
rain too late
In a list
A contest entry
- Last Rain by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended October 20, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
Comments
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That is fall this year, your haikus express the dryness of this year. Very well written, an excellent duet for the prompt.
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Susie
Thank you for your comments. It definitely has been a wet autumn, espcially in this area.
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I just like the feeling of this, being caught in midact. very nice.
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Aramanthine Lover
Thank you for your kind comments about my haiku chain. They are appreciated.
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