Strangled by anger; tears colour world.
Droplets of paint fall from broken heart
doves wings spanning calming water,
wind kisses deep wounds left open.
Rainbow reflection shimmering dullness,
oil colours cover world under my grey shadow
A contest entry
- Last Rain by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended October 20, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest # 4 VIRTUAL GARDENS (prewrites okay in this one) by .
500 points, ended April 26, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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this is a fine example of what I had wanted to see in this exercise, clairvoyant and beautiful, wonderful imagery, conveys much to me here thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with me
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Amazing capture....
doves wings spanning calming water,
wind kisses deep wounds left open
I really can appreciate how you so eloquently penned this poem from the photograph. Looking at the leaf, it does remind me of "dove wings spanning." You brought even greater vitality to the subject than the photographer did. I enjoyed this very much.
Knight70
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Thank you
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Very nice take on the prompt, again you have penned beautiful imagery, which is my favorite poetic quality Thanks for sharing and best wishes!
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thank you so much
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