Droplet of moisture reflecting pure prisms
of harmonious hues that mesmerize onlookers.
Adhering to hosting leaf like a child glued
to his mother in a crowd of admiring strangers.
As the scent of recent rain dissipates,
leaves glisten still, awaiting their next hydration.
Author notes
Picture prompt: http://pinheadd.deviantart.com/art/Last-Rain-67798730
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A contest entry
- Last Rain by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended October 20, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a surely strong piece, I love the spirit that you coax into this thanks for entering
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This is a beautiful piece.Goodluck to you in the contesat.Best wishes and much love
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Such a beautiful painting, Amazingly written good luck in the contest
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