Movement.
Sharp motions to quench primale desires.
Quick breaths against flushed skin.
Scorching fingertips caress.
I swear you can see the trails...
Faster now, each slam and groan,
Flesh crushing against flesh as we try to quench this desire.
Do you know you're hurting me?
I guess if doesn't matter.
As long as you get your satisfaction.
Faster now and I have to grip the sheets for support.
I've lost one thing tonight,
My sanity will not join it!
Each slam puts you deeper and now the blood is making it slick.
I'm going to hurt for a while after this it seems...
This dark room fills with panting, groaning.
Oh god I can't last!
Please, end it quick!
I, ah!
No! Ahh!
... Hot fluid on an open wound.
Made worse as our joined bodies separate.
You can act like it was an act of love.
And hold me as we sleep.
But you know I'll never love you.
Still...
For a primale desire...
Please hold me again next time.
Summer...
A contest entry
- The Experience That Changed You by loveyourfate.
900 points, ended December 30, 2007, 25 entries
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Comments
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Dude this was like an awsome poem i fucking love it. it's so emotional and powerful and I wish i could write poems like this!!!!!! if i have a contest i want you in it lol
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aww!! thankies! This, unfortunatly, is a past experience. Summer was someone close to me... past experiences are very easy to write about =(n_n)= Thanks for the comment!!
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wow i rely liked it great job and it had a lot of emotion
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Thanks
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This was good and all, but I said in my rules no erotica and no adult. sorry, DQ'ed.
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haha my bad! sorry! really sorry, soz!
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Thanks for your entry, I enjoyed reading this. The last two stanzas were especially well done !
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Thanks alot, it's a pretty emotional poem.
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So emotional...so powerful...I loved it. - bj
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Thanks alot
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This is so moving... emotional in content i felt. A great piece expressed brilliantly painting a clear picture of a sad reality... loneliness can force
us to compromise our integrity were partners are concerned. This is a movie in a poem. Excellent!
well done for being aware of the differences between desire... a the act of true union between two souls
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Wow, thank you, that's very nice of you to say
It's really hard to write poetry in this catagory, but for some reason the words seemed to flow that time. Thanks alot for your words!
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