Beaded razor thoughts trickling from lip's dew
poignant pearls glistening in the mind,
stormy necklace of fated droplets
soaking into the heart's leafs
becoming either autumn's withering
or spring's resurrection.
A contest entry
- Last Rain by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended October 20, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the idea that it possibly could be spring's resurrection, nicely done dude!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
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Excellent either or I love the two different ways the leaf can be thought of in your poem that was awesome!
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Thank you for the great comment.
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Magnificent!!
This is one Powerful piece penned Sweetness
Love the title...and the words:
beaded razor...
Now that gives some imagery
Wonderful take on the prompt
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you sweetness for the beautiful comment. You touch me so deeply with your words.
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