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Mercury Descending

In each drop of rain
drawn from our oceans,
condensed into moisture
weighing down the gray clouds,
do chemicals lurk
showered liberally on the leaves?

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    the last two lines,

    "do chemicals lurk
    showered liberally on the leaves?"

    are really creative