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Fool

  Wise men often say
  Fools rush in too fast
  They leap before they look
And their love will never last

  Each time I hear your voice
  See the twinkle in your eye
  I think on this one thing:
How love can we deny?

  When this emotion grips my breast
  When these feelings fill my mind
When I look into my future
And thoughts of you are all I find

  When my heart then skips a beat
  At the words I hear you say
And when I long to hold you
Every minute of the day

  How can I deny it all?
  How can I say no?
  I prefer to take all caution
And to the wind it throw

  And now I say quite boldly
  For you my love is true
  Whilst wise men wag their heads
I'll be a fool for you

Author notes

I believe it was Elvis Presley who sang "Wise men say only fools rush in... but I can't help falling in love with you". I've always liked that song, and now I've written my own twist to it. I tried to do so once before but wasn't entirely happy with the results. I like this a little better.

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