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Pains of Forgiveness

I can’t forgive him
I know it’s me
No I don't want to
For what he’s done to me
It has been long but still
Out of my reach to forgive
I thought my heart is kind
But in this case I find it blind
I want to feel that love
That used to fill me inside
He doesn’t know and even so
He would not, could not understand
How a woman like me felt and feel
Through all the events that was in hand
The damage he's done is huge to heal
If I could only sense his stand
Maybe then I can withdraw and
Take a step towards his land
I am in this cycle of Love and revenge
It's tearing me apart burning my heart
If I have the power to cure me inside
If I can only try to be kind
No for now I can't but the irony is
I can't even hide

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 15, 2007
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    I am in this cycle of Love and revenge
    It is tearing me apart burning me inside
    If I can only be kind instead of just hide

    this is really a sad verse but the life is shown in reality when it touches the heart and it breaks the life ..Indeed you brought a tearful write here..well done...

  • Mercury Rising
    October 21, 2007

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    A deeply emotional and heart-felt confessional poem that was very well crafted and a real pleasure to read. Keep up the wonderful works.

    David


    • Zommorroda
      October 22, 2007
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      Your kind words are much appreciated. I loved your work too. kitty