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Second-Hand Heart

Look at this tapestry
All tattered and torn
The threads are quite bare
And the colour's forlorn
Once woven perfection
Vibrant and strong
Now mended and patched up
With stitches made wrong

            I sure hope you don't mind
            My second-hand heart
            It's been cut up and sewn up
            And torn all apart
            But the thing you must always
            Remember 'tis true
            This second-hand heart
            Belongs just to you

The edges are jagged
It's been broken and bruised
Has loved and has lost
And been quite ill-used
But much more important
Than tatters and tears
It beats very strongly
Whenever you're near

            I sure hope you don't mind
            My second-hand heart
            It's been cut up and sewn up
            And torn all apart
            But what you must always
            Remember 'tis true
            This second-hand heart
            Belongs just to you

Never forget it
Never doubt that it's true
This tender emotion
Belongs just to you
I've said it before
I'll say it again
You're my love and desire
My very best friend

            And I hope you will keep it
            My second-hand heart
            It's been cut up and sewn up
            And torn all apart
            But the thing you must always
            Remember 'tis true
            This second-hand heart
            Was meant just for you

Author notes

I think this might make a good song because of the repeated, though slightly altered stanzas. I don't have any ideas on a melody though.

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  • Frodofan silver member
    October 20, 2007

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    It would make a good song.

    The title caught my eye. Perhaps a cliché idea, but much better than all of the other attempts at this concept I have seen!

    It was very sweet and you rhymed it nicely.

    If I ever meet anyone new, no doubt this will be going through my mind!