Shards of mirror etch my plea
as blood and pain, flow from me
Each time I cried because of you
Convinced me, that you weren't true
As the glass cuts, pale skin breaks
It helps to numb, the sad heartache
What once was real, is now gone
I am left here, abandoned, alone
Where are you, as my tears fall
I scream out loud, and kick the wall
My love has left and went away
I bleed and cry for you each day
Author notes
Pic-inspired option
A contest entry
- word bank and pic. inspired by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was sad but very very good i hope this is just the pic talking and not what happend to you if it is im sorry if its not thank god i would never wish shit like that on noone because it has happend to me thanks for sharing and god bless you forever and always love someone who cares dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
ps. if you ever want to chat or talk im here with open arms
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love the pic. thought the poem could use some work. It didn't captivate or make me feel it wasn't as passionet as a poem like this should be. And the flow...well i can't really recall a flow. Just opinion other then that keep on writing
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Awesomely written and well versed
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Wow!!
Very Powerful piece You have penned!
The picture adds that extra Touch but Your words alone speak volumes my Friend
Love the flow of this verse
but so sad to *feel*~~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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great write..
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dude i love that picture!
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