~she~
if you're the desert, then I'm the sea
~me~
nahhh, I'm the night sky, you're the moon
~she~
You told me you're the desert...
painted and barren, lost in twisting, biting sands
in need of an deep indigo oasis;
or am I remembering wrong?
~I~
indeed, perhaps you are correct,
as my soul has been desiccating
of recent excursions into the dunes,
where the burning soles of my feet
have calloused my heart,
as I seek the depths of indigo liquid,
hidden languidly amongst the palms,
revealed only by a blue moon.
~fini~
Author notes
a slight plagiarism of an IM comment series on a poem posted by Blue, utilizing Poetic license and therfore dedicated to her for her unique communication abilities and friendship.
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excellent
very unique form, but your mastery over it makes it work brilliantly. congrats
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Beautiful write. A very romantic write. I liked the parts of the desert and the sea and the sky and the moon. It seemed metaphorical, like in a way saying of how some people attract each other or opposites attracting each other like in the case of the desert and the sea. Keep up the great work.
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These words spread over me like a dream. Tranquil blending of polar personalities; each giving a small "oasis" with words expressed in comfortable flow. The image is divine by the way and the font is luminous just like that blue moon mentioned.
In appreciation of our relationship, Blue
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