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Beautiful Love

I smile at the thought,
Two beautiful people in love,
Souls meeting and becomming one,
Such intense feelings flowing.

Why cant they accept it?
Why cant they understand?
Who gave them the right to judge?

Cant they see the beauty of this Love....?

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I used your prompt... These where my exact thoughts when I saw the pics and the prompt.... Hope you enjoy reading it...

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  • Tristan Storm
    November 16, 2007
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    Thank you for your entry into my contest
    - Picture Prompt – ADULTS ONLY!! -

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    I most certainly enjoyed this, thanks again for entering. Short and sweet and to the point. I loved the duality of it and yet it also ties in greatly with my contest as intended.
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    Good Luck and I hope to read a lot more of your work soon.


  • Daizy21
    October 25, 2007
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    Stunning write!
    Yet again its nice to see something from you!
    Good luck with the contest!


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    October 22, 2007

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    some thing more than nice,,

    in between good and nice

    its ok
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words