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Beating Heart

She swears her heart is dead
But I know it still beats
With sorrow and with pain
And say, she's wrong again
It's beating, bittersweet.

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  • W a s p
    October 21, 2007
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    Very neat.

    Well written and thoughtful, you can see a young girls face in anguish. WASP.


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    October 20, 2007

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    i really like this, is such beauty for a small phrase, its something i can relate you, very nice,
    good job