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You

The days were getting hotter
It seemed so perfect
For I was filled with a burning desire-
For you
Our love was a magnificent joy
With the beauty of a million balloons being released into the sky
Your lips
Your eyes
Your smile
Your little white lies
You were my everything
I would do anything for you
Sell myself
For we had no wealth
I did it for you
Because I loved you

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  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    October 20, 2007

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    shit,, this is nice, very deep, very raw and hadrcore, thanks for the share, it had a great flow and the words were placed together so nicely !!!