An angel in my mind
A demon to my heart
You take these fragile wings
And tear them all apart
Escaping to the inner mind
Filled with my deafening cry
Covered in the shadow of doubt
Why can't I let you die?
Trying for the dream
That's never coming true
Grasping for the air
Wanting to cling to you
You say you really care
But you never even saw
What I did to my self
Everytime you were gone
I love you with everything
I'll give you my all
I hate you with everything
Because you made me fall
I don't want to love you
No matter how hard I try
I've told you before
I just can't let you die
So I'll cry again tonight
Tears falling like rain
Because you're the one oblivious
To all my tortured pain
Author notes
Not really sure what option this is...
A contest entry
- Return my Muse by Hersheys Kisses.
700 points, ended December 20, 2007, 28 entries
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Excellent work!
I love the rhyme scheme and depth.Raw emotion,that's what i call it.it was very strong and heart breaking,and it deeply intruiged me.Great job,hun
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i really loved this poem of yours..good job..i could feel the emotion in it
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baby...
Wow.. that was a perfect write... but absolutely heart wrenching.. im so sorry hunny...
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Thanks. it is heart wrenching but eventually i'll pull through. thanks for the comment
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Awww I'm so sorry I haven't been available lately school is kicking my ass!! I love this but I don't want you feeling bad!!! You have my cell number don't you? LOVE YOU MEGAN!! very powerful indeed!
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