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Simply Difficult

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The soft meaning
of sympathy
and forgiveness
holds the metal
bar of difficulty
in our tongue









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Written October 20, 2007

Prompt: Sorry

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    This is truly profound it hit me like a ton of bricks
    I really enjoyed this poem and will read it again.

  • vertigo beat
    October 20, 2007

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    Oh, that's beautiful. Saying sorry can be the most difficult thing sometimes. Liked the usage of words here.


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    And "sorry" is such a small word yet it means so much to the one receiving it... yes, at times it can be so difficult and the word can lie so heavy on the tongue. Lovely brevity here but with such power and thought.

    ~ Nicolette