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True Love

How is it that one should love,
ever so dearly
but be shunned and turned away
ever so cruelly?

The lover then loses hope,
damning Love forever
and finding some other rope,
they live like zombies,
releasing bitterness into the ethers

They are right!
They have indeed
Been decieved

Then they die . . .


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How joyful the moment
when one understands
                        that they love
and no amount of cruelty and insanity
can break the strong foundation of

Knowing

The one who loves purely and truely
never has a doubt
and never has a worry
They bring gifts to the one they love
never expecting a kiss of gratitude
never expecting a thankful attitude

And all because of that Knowing

They don't blindly follow their heart
over cliffs and sharp rocks . . .
Then come out scraped and bruised
And seeing the cruely, receive a shock

Oh, no . . . These lovers Know,
of the pain and the insanity
But they also Know the GOAL
and that is . . . IMMORTALITY

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  • Pisces Pieces
    November 4, 2007

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    This is ever so brilliant and insightful, such truth in every line and being the one who loves, I can relate to every precise feeling...it is so hard and everything you have said in the beginning...wow, I know it.

    I hope to talk to you soon and hope you are feeling better and everything is going well...sounds like it is


  • kabberz
    October 19, 2007

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    very good

    you have very good structure.
    I also like you contenct.
    very intresting.
    keep me updated on anything new =)