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Shattered Heart

My heart has been shattered,
I can't beleive this, It can't be true.
How did this end up happening?
Our relationship has been brutally ended.

I'm left here alone without you by my side,
I don't know how to keep surviving.
The nights are scary and lonely,
Longing for your arms, holding me tight.

With you I was finally safe and loved,
Now I'm left frightened and heartbroken.
Wishing you would give me a final chance,
A piece of me is missing without you here,
I'm sorry I couldn't show you my love.

If I had a chance to turn back time,
I would make it all about you.
Push my fears and selfishness aside,
Proving my love to you, fighting to keep you forever.

I'm sorry for everything I have done wrong,
Sorry for all the pain inflicted upon you.
I trully do love you and always will,
I fucked things up like I always do.

I beleived we would be together forever,
Now I'm left with only tears and memories.
I'm not sure how to move on without you,
I just hope someone's here to stop my fall.

Author notes

A poem to my ex gf. You may not beleive that I ever loved you and im sorry i made you feel like that. I would give anything to have your arms around me telling you that you love me, that we'll be together forever. All I can hear now are empty echos of the love we shared. I still do love you, I just wish I could have shown you.

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  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 19, 2007

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    It is hard to lose one that you'veloved so dearly. I was down that road twice, so i can really feel for you. I sure she'll get to look at think and think differently, hopefully take you back, because anyone who can write about doing anything just to have them back is heart warming, and shows that you deeply care about them. Let her read this, maybe it'll show her.

    Best of luck with things.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 19, 2007

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    * Sigh *

    Chrissy it is hard when we lose the one we love the most. A mere issue of opening up and being unable to express your love for someone is hard to do sometimes for fear of rejection and being hurt. For me the reason my last relationship failed she cheated on me got pregnant by my best friend and well skept it from me. Trust is the key issue to most relationships. Love is the reason to have a relationship. Sincereity is the goal to unify a true relationship. Summed up even though you are left heart broken and alone you never truly are alone. you have friends who are here for you and will always be here for you. Another way of looking at this is that now you know what you have to work on. It sucks when we are left with a reality check like that. Work on the flaws and when you are ready apply them to the relationship at hand when she comes back to you. That is merely my opinion for how I feel. Just remember you're never alone and have people here to support you. Signed, Paul