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How To Hide

Sometimes I can't feel who I am
I have fallen from grace
and my life, my heart has lost its pace
and the best part is no one gives a damn.

I wanna see the light
nothing in my world is free
I'm living in my own hell
beating myself up with fiery optimism.

What I lost in the fire
was my sense of spirt
my heart and body
one cannot exist without the other.

Sometimes I can't see who I am
mirror, mirror, on the floor
broken into pieces
shards of me, bleeding.

What I lost in the water
was my sense of being
it just floated away
into dark crevices.

Sometimes I don't know my pain
others can see it
without looking at me
and I don't know how to hide anything
anymore.

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  • Swan song gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    This is sad but it sure is smooth. The last staza
    stuck out to me it was good and your poem was very honest I like that.